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Re: S.O.S.

Posted by susan47 on July 14, 2006, at 11:30:10

In reply to S.O.S., posted by Poet on July 13, 2006, at 21:26:15

> Drowning in failure
> Mistakes anchored to the soul
> Life and preservers float away
> Mermaids’requiems lure
> Ghost ships beckon
> Demons hover
> Angels circle
> Rescue or devour?
>

Both. Both. a little at a time, sometimes more rescue, sometimes you're a bit chewy, and they spit you out ... sometimes your preserver is where you least expected it sometimes you'd rather drown.


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