Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 621027

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can I be any less?

Posted by Jai Narayan on March 16, 2006, at 16:36:07

when empty's zero
white upon vanilla white
how void can one be

 

Re: can I be any less? » Jai Narayan

Posted by James K on March 17, 2006, at 15:45:55

In reply to can I be any less?, posted by Jai Narayan on March 16, 2006, at 16:36:07

> when empty's zero
> white upon vanilla white
> how void can one be

--Is that Haiku? I like the idea of void as whiter than white. black seems full, but white Is empty.

James K

 

Re: can I be any less? » Jai Narayan

Posted by Susan47 on March 17, 2006, at 19:09:03

In reply to can I be any less?, posted by Jai Narayan on March 16, 2006, at 16:36:07

> when empty's zero
> white upon vanilla white
> how void can one be

Perfectly full, actually, when I see the the vanilla .. now white has meaning, too, but vanilla is darker, smoother, promising ...

 

thanks you ...two...2...duo...dos...tu (nm)

Posted by Jai Narayan on March 18, 2006, at 22:21:02

In reply to Re: can I be any less? » Jai Narayan, posted by Susan47 on March 17, 2006, at 19:09:03

 

Re: can I be any less?

Posted by Tanzanite on March 19, 2006, at 0:30:49

In reply to can I be any less?, posted by Jai Narayan on March 16, 2006, at 16:36:07

This speaks in volumes. I could never say so much in such eloquent form with so few words. Me, I just go on and on :) Jai I hope you are ok. You are not a nothing, but this prose/poem did mean much to me personally and I really felt this. Peace and hope you are ok.
Chelle

 

Re: can I be any less?

Posted by Jai Narayan on March 20, 2006, at 16:57:32

In reply to Re: can I be any less?, posted by Tanzanite on March 19, 2006, at 0:30:49

> This speaks in volumes. I could never say so much in such eloquent form with so few words. Me, I just go on and on :) Jai I hope you are ok. You are not a nothing, but this prose/poem did mean much to me personally and I really felt this. Peace and hope you are ok.
> Chelle

thank you, I am.
Ja*


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