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Re: can I be any less? » Jai Narayan

Posted by Susan47 on March 17, 2006, at 19:09:03

In reply to can I be any less?, posted by Jai Narayan on March 16, 2006, at 16:36:07

> when empty's zero
> white upon vanilla white
> how void can one be

Perfectly full, actually, when I see the the vanilla .. now white has meaning, too, but vanilla is darker, smoother, promising ...

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