Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 613295

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told you so

Posted by James K on February 25, 2006, at 19:16:30

move along.
leaving
There's nothing to show.
moving
You don't know
nothing
It's all gone.
leaking
Spilled on the ground.
lying
laying around.
waiting
cleaned up by the rain.
staying
left a permanent stain
talking
shouldn't have said
dripping
bled from the head
healing
scars on the inside
Peeling
scars on the outside
bouncing
another ambulance ride.
breathing
clean and white inside.
leaving
which one am I?
does it matter?
I f*cking told you
I f*cking told you
I f*cking told you

Re: told you so (you are the best!)

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 26, 2006, at 20:28:17

In reply to told you so, posted by James K on February 25, 2006, at 19:16:30

> move along.
> leaving
> There's nothing to show.
> moving
> You don't know
> nothing
> It's all gone.
> leaking
> Spilled on the ground.
> lying
> laying around.
> waiting
> cleaned up by the rain.
> staying
> left a permanent stain
> talking
> shouldn't have said
> dripping
> bled from the head
> healing
> scars on the inside
> Peeling
> scars on the outside
> bouncing
> another ambulance ride.
> breathing
> clean and white inside.
> leaving
> which one am I?
> does it matter?
> I f*cking told you
> I f*cking told you
> I f*cking told you

Okay you darling man, this sounds very hard for you.
but, I love love love your poetry.
you have a gift for words...they love you.
I love them...the one's you write anyway.
please keep writing...I beg you.
Ja*

Re: told you so

Posted by B2chica on February 27, 2006, at 11:57:33

In reply to told you so, posted by James K on February 25, 2006, at 19:16:30

you wrote from my soul.
b2c

Re: told you so

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 28, 2006, at 20:52:41

In reply to Re: told you so, posted by B2chica on February 27, 2006, at 11:57:33

> you wrote from my soul.
> b2c

loved your comment.

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