Re: told you so (you are the best!)

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 26, 2006, at 20:28:17

In reply to told you so, posted by James K on February 25, 2006, at 19:16:30

> move along.
> leaving
> There's nothing to show.
> moving
> You don't know
> nothing
> It's all gone.
> leaking
> Spilled on the ground.
> lying
> laying around.
> waiting
> cleaned up by the rain.
> staying
> left a permanent stain
> talking
> shouldn't have said
> dripping
> bled from the head
> healing
> scars on the inside
> Peeling
> scars on the outside
> bouncing
> another ambulance ride.
> breathing
> clean and white inside.
> leaving
> which one am I?
> does it matter?
> I f*cking told you
> I f*cking told you
> I f*cking told you
Okay you darling man, this sounds very hard for you.
but, I love love love your poetry.
you have a gift for words...they love you.
I love them...the one's you write anyway.
please keep writing...I beg you.
Ja*

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