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Posted by Bobby on September 29, 2005, at 8:53:31
She said,"I'm sorry
for all the things i've done."
She said, "I'm sorry
I was only having fun."
She said,"I'm sorry
that it turned out this way."
She said'"I'm sorry
but I never meant to stay."Well I'm sorry too
for ever loving you
I know you've come to say goodbye
So please excuse me while I cryShe said,"I'm sorry
it was just another fling."
She said,"I'm sorry
but I can't change a thing."
She said,"I'm sorry
I hope you understand."
She said,"I'm sorry."
And then she shook my hand.Well I'm sorry too
for ever loving you
I know you've come to say goodbye
so please excuse me while I cryShe said,"I'm sorry
that you fell in love with me."
She said,"I'm sorry
but I've got to be free."
She said, ""I'm sorry
But I'm sure you'll be alright."
she said, "I'm sorry."
and she vanished in the night.
Posted by greyskyeyes on September 29, 2005, at 12:35:52
In reply to I'm sorry, posted by Bobby on September 29, 2005, at 8:53:31
OK, between this one and the others above, you have me crying into my yogurt. Happy? (just kidding!)
You write beautifully. I particularly like 'lost'... "her kiss like soft rain on a summer's eve". Some very powerful imagery. Post away.
~ grey
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