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Re: I'm sorry » Bobby

Posted by greyskyeyes on September 29, 2005, at 12:35:52

In reply to I'm sorry, posted by Bobby on September 29, 2005, at 8:53:31

OK, between this one and the others above, you have me crying into my yogurt. Happy? (just kidding!)

You write beautifully. I particularly like 'lost'... "her kiss like soft rain on a summer's eve". Some very powerful imagery. Post away.

~ grey


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