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Posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 12:50:27
In reply to Re: Jay's Journal :Through webdating Please helpco » Jay, posted by Phil on April 20, 2006, at 20:58:45
Posted by Jay on April 22, 2006, at 13:10:25
In reply to Re: Snooty Women!! » Jay, posted by Phil on April 22, 2006, at 12:01:12
> What do they call that place? Torture Board?
> That's worse than real life.
Ya, it just goes to show..it takes all kinds, eh? heh. But, so far that's only been one..and there have been a couple of nice gals who have responded back. I am a little frustrated though, because I've replied to about 100 people, and maybe 5-6 have gotten back. Like, I am far from saying I am some drop dead good looking guy, but man...I am not that bad to look at.(Geezz..I HOPE not!..lol) Well...been over this territory a few times before..heh. It's like finding a needle in a haystack. Thanks Phil...just letting out some verbal hot-air...lol..Jay :-)
Posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 13:19:16
In reply to Re: Snooty Women!! » Phil, posted by Jay on April 22, 2006, at 13:10:25
hi, jay..i swear "love" always happens for me when i'm *not* looking for it. (but, then again, maybe i've never been anything *but* not looking for it..:-)).
you're an outgoing guy...perhaps you could just start doing some activities you like, and see if you meet someone that way?
i would also suggest you try becoming contented with just yourself first...might help...who knows..can't hurt. that might be just the key. who knows...just throwing stuff out there.
did you try those dating sites..like match.com or eharmony or whatever? they scientifically match you, man. you're an enfp, so you'd probably be matched to an infj or an intj...
aim:)
Posted by Phillipa on April 22, 2006, at 13:37:24
In reply to i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen... » Jay, posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 13:19:16
I agree with Alesta . Could I add some corrective criticism from my perspective only. You sound rather desperate. I would leave out the word cheap, you sentence what does this guy know, and simply state I am a social worker don't explain your hours . And just talk about you in general. What do you think? Love Phillipa
Posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 13:56:24
In reply to Re: i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen..., posted by Phillipa on April 22, 2006, at 13:37:24
> I agree with Alesta . Could I add some corrective criticism from my perspective only. You sound rather desperate. I would leave out the word cheap, you sentence what does this guy know, and simply state I am a social worker don't explain your hours . And just talk about you in general. What do you think? Love Phillipa
i agree phillipa. absolutely leave out that stuff. the rest of his ad is just gorgeous though. jay..fine tune this and you are bound to strike gold. yes, take out anything that smacks of 'neediness'. definitely.:) there's a subconscious penchant to run from that, in all humans, i think...:)
amy
p.s. i hope i didn't convey that i think the personality theorists are correct in their nearly opposite personality matchings for relationships. i always find that i do better w/ ppl who are more similar, although that is not my final assessment by any means..what i'm saying is, i really have no idea...;)
Posted by TexasChic on April 22, 2006, at 14:12:45
In reply to Jay's Journal: Webdate..the AD..comm.please, posted by Jay on April 22, 2006, at 0:40:03
If it were me, and I'm far from an expert on any of this, I would try to keep your ad as positive as possible. That's the kind I would respond to anyway. I don't think there's any reason to mention anything about not focusing on appearance, bank accounts, or looking for something cheap, ect., (although people do it all the time) because no one's going to know if you're actually telling the truth or not. In fact, when I see statements like that it makes me think the guy has something to hide. So you may as well keep those qualities to show when you actually meet up with someone. You're trying to get someone interested enough to respond and give you a chance, so don't list what you consider your failings. All the stuff about what you have to give is great though. Just try to avoid saying anything negative about yourself, and I think you will come across more as you hope to.
As for that chic blocking you, what a psycho! Be glad you don't have to deal with her.
Keep up the good work. At least you're trying, which stands alot more chance of success than not trying at all! Which is more than I can say for myself.
-T
Posted by gardenergirl on April 22, 2006, at 19:55:37
In reply to Snooty Women!!, posted by Jay on April 22, 2006, at 11:33:21
Hi Jay,
I'm sorry that happened. One thought, though. Any chance you used the word "gal" in your email to her?gg
Posted by verne on April 22, 2006, at 20:40:54
In reply to Jay's Journal: Webdate..the AD..comm.please, posted by Jay on April 22, 2006, at 0:40:03
Jay,
I would leave out the hypothetical conversations like, "Now, you ask, "what does this guy know???"...well I don't claim to know a LOT, but I am in the "field". I am a social worker who has worked in marriage and couples counselling the past. Oh no..no you are scared. Wait! ..."
It gives the impression that you will anticipate what they think, know what they are thinking, and then interrupt them before they can say anything.
I'm the last person on earth to give *dating* advice though. I'm washed up, alone, bereft, bitter, and deeply sad. (I'm borrowing the description, "deeply sad" from the show "Red Dwarf" - I think it was Rimmer who was the most "deeply sad" person in the universe)
I might not use the expression, "grave mistake". I think of buried-bodies serious. May not be the impression you're going for.
I probably could nitpick your ad, or even rewrite it, but then you'd be guaranteed failure. In fact, just do the opposite of what I say and you'll do fine. (but that would mean, doing the opposite of doing the opposite of what I say)
Verne
Posted by Deneb on April 22, 2006, at 20:57:56
In reply to Jay's Journal: Webdate..the AD..comm.please, posted by Jay on April 22, 2006, at 0:40:03
Where are you posting your info?
I added myself to this site called Plentyoffish and I got a lot of replies. It's a free site. I got too many replies. They just kept coming. I'm not gorgeous or anything, but a lot of people were interested. Now I've hidden my profile. I'm not ready to date yet.
Deneb*
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 17:51:20
In reply to Re: Snooty Women!! » Jay, posted by Phil on April 22, 2006, at 12:01:12
> What do they call that place? Torture Board?
> That's worse than real life.It was just a one-off remark Phil...like everybody says...I'll just leave it alone.
Thank you my friend..and I really am digging your fashion statement in you pic above. :-)
Jay
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 17:56:05
In reply to i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen... » Jay, posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 13:19:16
Well...I have been looking into eharmony, but those other ones are not available in Canada yet. That sucks. I only reach out and start the dating thing when I am feeling better about myself, so the "hits and blows" really don't bother me as much. I've *never* had that though..when people say "..love comes around when you aren't looking.." I am the shy, quiet type, and I've noticed that women freak out when they find out I am interested in them (IRL).
Thnx,
Jay
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 17:58:19
In reply to Re: i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen..., posted by Phillipa on April 22, 2006, at 13:37:24
> I agree with Alesta . Could I add some corrective criticism from my perspective only. You sound rather desperate. I would leave out the word cheap, you sentence what does this guy know, and simply state I am a social worker don't explain your hours . And just talk about you in general. What do you think? Love Phillipa
Yes, well I've made some stong changes, and I will post my *new* ad along with some responses. You are right, my last ad was sorta twisted.
Thanx :-) Jay
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 18:00:20
In reply to Re: i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen... » Phillipa, posted by alesta on April 22, 2006, at 13:56:24
My friend...I will post the new profile and some responses to get more fire going. This could be a reality-tv-show..eh?
Jay :-)
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 18:07:14
In reply to Re: Jay's Journal: Webdate..the AD..comm.please, posted by TexasChic on April 22, 2006, at 14:12:45
> If it were me, and I'm far from an expert on any of this, I would try to keep your ad as positive as possible. That's the kind I would respond to anyway. I don't think there's any reason to mention anything about not focusing on appearance, bank accounts, or looking for something cheap, ect., (although people do it all the time) because no one's going to know if you're actually telling the truth or not. In fact, when I see statements like that it makes me think the guy has something to hide. So you may as well keep those qualities to show when you actually meet up with someone. You're trying to get someone interested enough to respond and give you a chance, so don't list what you consider your failings. All the stuff about what you have to give is great though. Just try to avoid saying anything negative about yourself, and I think you will come across more as you hope to.
>
> As for that chic blocking you, what a psycho! Be glad you don't have to deal with her.
>
> Keep up the good work. At least you're trying, which stands alot more chance of success than not trying at all! Which is more than I can say for myself.
>
> -THi TexasChic...well thank you for your encouragement. I'd have to say off the top, you should really check this stuff out especially if you are trying to wean away from social phobia or anxiety.(As I am) Some of it can get you down...but there are some nice people too. Just watch out for the 'players', though.
Ya, as far as the personal info about finances and such..I think I edited them out of my new profile, which I will post. You make very valid points.
Thanx,
Jay
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 18:25:29
In reply to Re: Snooty Women!! » Jay, posted by gardenergirl on April 22, 2006, at 19:55:37
> Hi Jay,
> I'm sorry that happened. One thought, though. Any chance you used the word "gal" in your email to her?
>
> ggNo...absolutely not. I actually only use that word on-line, when talking in a general sense say to friends. It's like.."So, you guys and gals.." Instead.."You mean and women"..or the more demaning "Boys and Girls." Make sence?
Thanks..
Jay
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 18:31:06
In reply to Re: Jay's Journal: Webdate..the AD..comm.please » Jay, posted by verne on April 22, 2006, at 20:40:54
> Jay,
>
> I would leave out the hypothetical conversations like, "Now, you ask, "what does this guy know???"...well I don't claim to know a LOT, but I am in the "field". I am a social worker who has worked in marriage and couples counselling the past. Oh no..no you are scared. Wait! ..."
>
> It gives the impression that you will anticipate what they think, know what they are thinking, and then interrupt them before they can say anything.
>
> I'm the last person on earth to give *dating* advice though. I'm washed up, alone, bereft, bitter, and deeply sad. (I'm borrowing the description, "deeply sad" from the show "Red Dwarf" - I think it was Rimmer who was the most "deeply sad" person in the universe)
>
> I might not use the expression, "grave mistake". I think of buried-bodies serious. May not be the impression you're going for.
>
> I probably could nitpick your ad, or even rewrite it, but then you'd be guaranteed failure. In fact, just do the opposite of what I say and you'll do fine. (but that would mean, doing the opposite of doing the opposite of what I say)
>
> Verne
>
>No...I think you have a lot of wisdom Verne. It's only been through very horrific and terrible lives that I've seen people 'rise above' and have so much more important stuff to say. You are correct in what you are saying about what I said being a social worker and that stuff.(Mind you, I haven't done marriage counselling in over 15 years..so add the depression in, and I date back to the 'Leave it to Beaver' times...hehhe:-)
I'll post my new ad and see what you folks have to say.
Thanks,
Jay :-)
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 18:32:30
In reply to Re: Jay's Journal: Webdate..the AD..comm.please » Jay, posted by Deneb on April 22, 2006, at 20:57:56
I don't really wanna say...kinda confidential. :)
Jay
Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 19:02:46
Okay..here is my new personal ad...Redux
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Jokester. Lover. Dreamer. Philosopher. Strolling on the beach under the moon and earthshine. Soulscape. I am not interested in finding a date or a partner for anything 'cheap', as in 'just someone to hang out with', or to be 'casual' with. Maybe I have high expectations, but I'd like a tiny bit of that true humanistic 'magic', if possible. The kind that comes from the heart, not from the bank account or reflected in a mirror. I take pride in my appearance and my attraction comes through both my basic physical appearance and my much more deeper heartfelt one. Does that make sense? I hope so. Also, if you try to measure up a person by one or two pictures on this website, I think that is a grave mistake. OK...so a bit more about me. Well..to me, life is not a race, but a journey...and my other fav quote, there is no failure unless you give up. I consider myself sensitive, kind, compassionate, yet strong, full of a zest for life (at most times as humanly possible;-) , with my eyes to the sky. Some of the things I really love..music, Fall sky's..winter cabins by the fire..I am really hoping to travel much more, especially through Europe. I've got a LOT to give, and I know my way around being a good 'partner' in a healthy relationship. So, let's start by being friends.
-----------------OK....I've decided not to post replies...because I don't know...I just don't quite feel right about it, and have a feeling it is gonna come back and haunt me! I kept in some of the things you guys suggested I take out. But...I'm just doing it one step at a time.
Thank you's allllll veddy much :-)
Jay
Posted by verne on April 23, 2006, at 19:29:26
In reply to Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all..hehe, posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 19:02:46
Jay, whenever I read, "winter cabins by the fire", I see a circle of cabins huddled around a fire. hee,hee, smily face (still not sure how to make those things)
I'm afraid to use chatspeak for fear I'll say something wrong. (I do that just fine with regular speak, but that's beside the point) I can't stop this post - kinda like Robert Klein and his leg.
there it stopped.
verne
Posted by Phil on April 23, 2006, at 19:38:09
In reply to Re: Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all..hehe, posted by verne on April 23, 2006, at 19:29:26
kinda like Robert Klein and his leg.
there it stopped.
verne
I love it. haha. Haven't thought about that in a while.
Posted by Phil on April 23, 2006, at 19:44:58
In reply to Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all..hehe, posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 19:02:46
"I think that is a grave mistake."
Too heavy.
Yeah, and you gotta get that 'move your cabin round the fire thing' straightened out.
Otherwise...carry on...
: )
Posted by madeline on April 23, 2006, at 19:58:00
In reply to Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all..hehe, posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 19:02:46
Well, if it means anything, I would go out with you.
Just one thing:
"Fall sky's" should read Fall skies?
maddie
Posted by Phillipa on April 23, 2006, at 21:43:50
In reply to Re: Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all..hehe » Jay, posted by madeline on April 23, 2006, at 19:58:00
Jay just remove the word cheap. And you sound like you are excusing your appearnace when you say a few pictures on a website. That part. Just who you are and how you love life and all the wonders that come with it. Like a cozy fire, stars in the sky, cozy meeting on a friendly basis, and traveling a lot to see the world for fun and educational purposes. Love Phillipa hope that help. We're becoming proofreaders does it Pay?
Posted by Tabitha on April 24, 2006, at 9:50:07
In reply to Re: Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all..hehe, posted by Phillipa on April 23, 2006, at 21:43:50
Yeah, Jay, those ads sound better if they focus only on the positive. To me, anything that sounds like it's criticizing the reader is a huge red flag. So no need to say you don't want a cheap, casual thing-- just say you want a serious committed relationship. And no need to offer up your opinion of people who might be making choices based on pictures. It sounds very defensive, kinda like you're thumbing your nose at anyone who doesn't choose you. Not a good thing to do in your ad. Your target audience is the ones who will choose you, after all.
Posted by alesta on April 27, 2006, at 14:58:40
In reply to Re: Jay's new Personal Ad: Plus resp..come y'all.. » Jay, posted by Phil on April 23, 2006, at 19:44:58
> "I think that is a grave mistake."
>
> Too heavy.
>
> Yeah, and you gotta get that 'move your cabin round the fire thing' straightened out.
>
> Otherwise...carry on...
> : )yes...i agree with phil's changes (well done phil...you are a charmer).
jay...this ad is really fantastic. run with it man, run with it! reality tv indeed! and i agree with focusing on the 'friends first' concept...love can sneak up on ya like that...it's definitely another approach...become "friends" with chicks..hahaha! hehe
alesta:)
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