Posted by Jay on April 23, 2006, at 17:58:19
In reply to Re: i beg your pardon!! only kiddeen..., posted by Phillipa on April 22, 2006, at 13:37:24
> I agree with Alesta . Could I add some corrective criticism from my perspective only. You sound rather desperate. I would leave out the word cheap, you sentence what does this guy know, and simply state I am a social worker don't explain your hours . And just talk about you in general. What do you think? Love Phillipa
Yes, well I've made some stong changes, and I will post my *new* ad along with some responses. You are right, my last ad was sorta twisted.
Thanx :-) Jay
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