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The Lounge (an Ashbery Erasure poem) by HF

Posted by Happyflower on April 13, 2008, at 15:17:10

The Lounge

That relief pestered
With secrets,
Always severs hearts.

Some tamper with fresh
Wrong circumstances.
Brothels soon come.

It could have been simple,
I suppose we want
This sugar-coated.

If others see
The Disturbance

Nothing a hand and
Self mutilation

The old way
Can fund.


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