Posted by Jai Narayan on July 20, 2007, at 23:09:34
In reply to Inviz, posted by scratchpad on July 20, 2007, at 18:37:35
> Inability
> to be seen
> Inability
> to see
> shades are drawn way down
> eyes barely open
> I can't see in
> or out
>
> Speechless
> Unspoken
> Unheard
> No one to answer if
> nothing is said
> I'm silent
>
>
> consequences
> of action
> or of none
> I can't move
> wouldn't know in which direction
> I'd go
> somebody give me a start
> hot wheels
> way off track
>
> Cloaked
> Croaked
> Doped
> Duped
> Stuped
> Stupid
>
> Invizhey, how are you doing? I saw your poem and wanted to say "hi". Is your poem reflective of how you are feeling right now? I see you. sending you good energy right now.
your friend
Jai
poster:Jai Narayan
thread:770794
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