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glassy eyed

Posted by Toph on June 7, 2007, at 23:44:40

at the sink so sick he wallows
head hung low he grits his teeth
broken dreams he feels so hollow
quicksand's grip pulls him beneath
he lifts his head a stark reflection
empty eyes a weathered face
sees contempt and disaffection
disappointment won't erase
he lifts his hands to block the vision
covering eyes so dark from strain
this won't quell the mind's derision
only spell him his distain

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glassy eyed Toph 6/7/07
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Yes, as Fayeroe says (nm) » Toph susan47 6/11/07

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