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Re: not clever TRIGGER

Posted by rainbutterfly on September 12, 2006, at 0:03:44

In reply to very clever, posted by rainbutterfly on September 10, 2006, at 17:33:13

angry
baby crying in the dark
suffocating in pillows, wrappings too tight
why does the mother hate her?
why is she always bad?
She tries everything.... the mother still hates and rejects her
So it must be her fault
baby stops crying
falling into despair
baby dies inside

young butterfly sees a therapist
he seems kind
the butterfly starts to open up
but it's so hard to trust
days between sessions drag on endlessly
she has to hide her tears
therapist then becomes angry
he confuses anger with meanness
so mistrust wins
the butterfly dies inside


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