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Re: A face looked up from in a well » Paul1000

Posted by Estella on August 2, 2006, at 2:51:58

In reply to Re: A face looked up from in a well, posted by Paul1000 on August 1, 2006, at 10:42:47

> Thanks for the feedback. I liked the thought of a reflection (darker and distorted)down below, suggesting imprisonment. Yeah, a little like the dog and bone, but not the jealousy part, of course.

:-)
Narcissus... Oh thats the story of someone falling in love with their reflection. Different story again :-)

Yeah. Imprisonment. Little Timmy (Bart) down the well. Sorry... Got my associations going.

I liked your poem very much indeed. I write poetry very rarely. Need to be in the mood or something. I have been known to ramble a fair bit in poetic form, but I don't think it really counts as poetry. But I enjoyed yours very much. Thanks for posting it.


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