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waaaahhh » llrrrpp

Posted by ClearSkies on June 11, 2006, at 8:35:32

In reply to weeeeee, posted by llrrrpp on June 10, 2006, at 22:02:31

climbing through the window
of the drunk me
leaving the crumbs of real time me
going out of my house
I figure I fall into a hostile bush
because I wake up with bruises
and scratches
beyond that window
is the void
that wonderful timeless place
I don't know what happens there
but when I come back to myself
my body has lost hours
my brain has lost cells
my liver has gained some fat
The void is not kind to me
I deserve the hurt it puts on me
I deserve the guilt
You can climb out the window
but if you can't climb back in
where does that leave you?
out in the endless dark
alone
no relief


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