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Re: last try.... » llrrrpp

Posted by sleepygirl on May 16, 2006, at 22:13:58

In reply to Re: last try...., posted by llrrrpp on May 16, 2006, at 20:40:59

good point about the contrast and tension (I like that)...I made the thing too thin with all the scraping, from the point of view of the front it looks awkward, but I did want it to look listless maybe, kind of frail, weak, tired - but it looks sort of distorted to me - from the front (and not in a good way)


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