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The toilet

Posted by susan47 on April 22, 2006, at 7:51:38

I empty into the toilet,
I flush,
and the toilet breaks
it is broken
the toilet was made of glass
you see
you see
you see so much when
your life is uncovered
and you have been spewing into
a vessel
which cannot hold anything
and the toilet breaks
and you are left having
to apologize to the person
who has to clean up the mess
What I have emptied
is words

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The toilet susan47 4/22/06
Re: The toilet; I love this poem (nm) Jai Narayan 4/30/06
Me too James K 5/8/06
James K...yahoooooooooo! Jai Narayan 5/12/06

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