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Re: whimpering like a beat dog*trigger*

Posted by Susan47 on January 19, 2006, at 8:52:01

In reply to whimpering like a beat dog*trigger*, posted by James K on January 18, 2006, at 13:00:51

> alarm clock
> I can't do this
> I'm too sick
> again
> turn off the clock
> turn off the phone
> turn off the answering machine
>
> put on some music
> put on some vodka
> put on some ambien
> put on some vicodin
>
> drink up boys
> the beer is cold
> and the vodka's frozen
> the music is loud
> bruce asks me
> if a dreams a lie if it don't come true
> or is it something worse
> richard tells me
> I was screaming let me out of here
> before I was even born
> I'm screaming it's worse
> it's worse
>
> whimpering like a beat dog
>
> then there's something about
> butcher knifes
> then there's something about
> the sink
> the phone
> the sun
> the birds
> the sirens
>
> cying like a beat little boy
> if i still could
> but the crying stops
> and the hurting begins
> and it's happening again

(((JamesK)))


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