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Sponge- (poss. CA trigger, sorry)

Posted by Susan47 on December 23, 2005, at 0:38:25

The Oldest..
child, deep-eyed
timid little smiles
no words,
wide-eyed
frown
the unattractive one, the one with brains, but you'd never know it, the creative one, the slightly crazy one, you can't trust what she's going to say or do next,
She's a constant disappointment, that one.
What to do with a child like that?
What to do, what to do .. let's beat her up, emotionally.
She can be the sponge.
Someone needs to do it ..
she's the oldest,
she can handle it.
She should know better.
Look at her..
what an example.
Let's make her the example for the others.
Let's get her.
Let's get her.
Let's get her.
You have to stop beating her.
You have to stop.
People are starting to talk.
We have to move.
There's too much screaming.
I love you.
I love you.
I love you.


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