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Re: how could you have done anything wrong?

Posted by Susan47 on October 26, 2005, at 21:35:20

In reply to Re: how could you have done anything wrong?, posted by sunny10 on October 26, 2005, at 8:37:43

..,.."the black tent of night flapped around his heart...."
Very beautiful, I love this, but it's too adult. However I confess I've never read this, and it would be a beautiful and romantic read-aloud for a couple, don't you think? A Loving Couple. Not me and my ex.
Not me and anyone ..
I'm just whining, it'll pass over.
Everything does.
Eventually.
Including myself.
And yourself, and all of us.
Everything as though it never was :)


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