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Your Tie

Posted by Susan47 on October 20, 2005, at 21:06:49

It was blue that day. You stood behind the counter, your defense. Eyes down. Speaking to air. Speaking at me. You looked up, eyes meeting mine, following them to your tie.
The wet spot.
Something wiped at once,
over it's perfection.
You see what I see
and you grab your tie between two fingers,
flick the end outwards, at me ..
You Blush .. so beautifully.
So endearing, you.
And I realize, I hadn't been thinking
anything bad, just wondering what the rub was.
Was that the fabric, was it meant that way?
Or was it an accident,
perhaps you don't remember
But I loved you, once.


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