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Re: Too Late » cockeyed

Posted by muffled on September 10, 2005, at 22:59:29

In reply to Too Late, posted by cockeyed on September 10, 2005, at 20:30:55

>
> [shoulda done this a year ago. and it's probally the wrong board.]
>
> RAILROAD FLATS
>
> Go ahead and love some one
> Then watch her die.
> And then it's him who's late
> for the sky.
>
> And these rails lead no where.
> Still you gotta try
> Our's to reason and not know why
> But it's so god*d empty
> I can't even cry. Cockeyed

I don't know why its too late. But its beautiful. It shows so much love and insight. It touched me which sounds totally cornball, but it did. I don't know why. Mebbe cuz I would be so honored if someone wrote that way about me when i passed, that I was valued. I would be glad that the one who loved me and wrote it knew that 'still you gotta try'. That would make me happy. Thanks for sharing that.

 

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