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Re: F*ck Me

Posted by caillou on September 8, 2005, at 9:51:46

In reply to F*ck Me, posted by Susan47 on August 28, 2005, at 20:55:00

Hi Susan

I really liked this poem esp. the part about old age. It was powerful.
It inspired me to write a similar one. I hope you don't mind I post it here.

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Hold me,
F*ck me,
Make me feel complete.

Hug me,
Touch me,
Make me feel special.

Kiss me,
Feel me,
Become a part of me.

Protect me,
Guide me,
Please satisfy me.

Open me,
Love me,
Please make me happy.

Cure me,
Mend me,
Please don't leave me.

Release me,
Cry with me,
Please share my feelings.

Hold me,
Love me,
Please don't let me go.



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