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knife

Posted by cockeyed on August 1, 2005, at 21:37:38

Tomorrow I go under the knife
ah the thrill of my life,
hope to hell that I'll make it.
Last time was great
but I still have to wait
for this, this the next time

Last time was fun
but there's a chance it'll come undone
and I'm scared
no matter how much I might fake it.
But there are so many who have no chance at all
so I'll take my chance and be glad I'm lucky
enuff to to take it.
a
cause there are those
who have nothing, when it's chose
and no chance at all to make it.
I wish to say more, a prayer to help even
the score. But I can't because I'm too damn selfish
I worry about me and all that I see
may be reduced to the view of a shellfish.

[sorry, but I'm scared. I don't think it's weird
but I wish I could just let it happen. Because
no matter what, you can if and or but, what
happens is gonna happen. just wish it was over.] cockeyed.


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