Posted by TamaraJ on June 30, 2005, at 18:40:50
In reply to Re: poem ... It's Too Dark, Love » gabbii, posted by atticus on June 30, 2005, at 18:24:25
Just my own personal opinion, but when I read "How much weight can a teardrop bear to hold", I thought it, too, would make a beautiful and moving song.
> Thanks, gabbi. I think this piece is the closest I've ever come to writing a poem that would work as song lyrics -- and that refrain came first. The verses were constructed around it. Ta. Cheshire Cat
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