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Re: To Be Wanted (Sexual, warning)

Posted by Susan47 on April 15, 2005, at 15:10:32

In reply to Re: To Be Wanted (Sexual, warning), posted by Susan47 on April 15, 2005, at 14:03:11

I see the smile, now.
The private little secret smile.
No fear in a few words.
None at all.
How perfectly lovely...

and lonely, for some.

But not You.

Your will be done
by this loving woman
who awaits you,
because of who you are,
you see,
you make the house a home.

You give this woman
the softness of spirit,
because of your love for her,
you give her the warmth
she lacks alone.

This one you are wedded to,
no doubt for life,
she's, soft and hard,
warm and cold ...
needing you So Much.
I can see how much she needs you.

You're the whole world,
to this Woman.
I can't imagine anything more awful.
Can you? Perhaps you can.

My oh my, the illusions I build.
With this imagination, you'd think I'd be able to write,
wouldn't you?
You'd think well, why doesn't she just Get It Together
and Write,
damn it?

Because she can't, that's why.
She doesn't have the stability,
the spirit, or the love
available
without
the hallucination.


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