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Re: Red Lines » PM80

Posted by rayww on March 24, 2005, at 17:40:36

In reply to Red Lines, posted by PM80 on March 24, 2005, at 15:25:48

I didn't know I could feel such sadness from reading a poem. It almost seems that a person who needs the red line has a deep seeded hope. Now, don't be offended please! These roots and trails bleed deep within our soul and seldom do we reach the core of the pit. But what if that was your real longing? The longing you were completely unaware of? That Christ was cut, and bled for your pain, that he wanted to make himself suffer as much as it is possible for a human to suffer, so He could know how you feel, and then overcome, be it by God himself. let Christ do the bleeding for you, he already has. now let Him heal you. i pray he will.


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