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Re: You dropped a file... » 10derHeart

Posted by alexandra_k on February 6, 2005, at 19:06:48

In reply to Re: You dropped a file... » Susan47, posted by 10derHeart on February 5, 2005, at 0:26:49

I am glad you are here :-)

> I don't come here much. Too chicken. The last time I lurked on this board, I read things you wrote and
>
> I cried.
> Kept reading.
> Cried some more.
> Tore myself away.
> Back and forth.
> Don't read.
> (but I have to...)
> It hurts too much.
> (but it feels good to hurt...sort of)
> No, I can't. It's all too true.
> (but I must)
> And so it was.
>
> But tonight
> Tonight, dear Susan
> With these five simple lines
> You have touched me so deeply
> In a place I usually keep protected
> I am a lover of words
> I live for their beauty, rhythm and power
> But I am now utterly lost for them
> You took my breath away
> It's five little lines
> It's intimacy, longing, wistful memory
> grief sadness adoration
> It's five little lines
> It has pierced my heart.
>
> Oh Susan. What did you do? How did you know?
>

 

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