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Re: Dining Light

Posted by smokeymadison on January 24, 2005, at 19:06:42

In reply to poem ... Infant Sushi, posted by Atticus on January 24, 2005, at 14:57:56

Geisha swirl through iridescent iris winds
Or perhaps
Rubrious plaid crossings scream
Ink dissolves paper thin FONT
Grey bleeds bloody drama
Where kitchen sweet and sour pounces
Tearing tendons torturing tortoises
Starlings, pinpoints, prickles.
Nourishment flows costly.
Sucklings, lampreys, eels and squids:
Dietary delights, distraught patrons,
Plumb juices scorching copper.
Liver cleansing wines whirl:
Trailing veins, spinning fixtures
Nostalgia, whim, nor flights of fancy,
Lower the satisfaction of buttery bounty.
Scalding ice, frying rice,
Tight, miniscule bites.

SM


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