Black Blood in the Sandbox..oh my f*cken lord.....

Posted by Jai Narayan on December 11, 2004, at 20:31:25

In reply to poem ... Black Blood in the Sandbox, posted by Atticus on December 11, 2004, at 19:20:42

what a f*cken poem.
It's so viceral and painful. I feel like I am on the spit rotating.
first one side is chrisp then move me to the other side...
while I moan and wonder if I will make it out alive.
Of course not...I am dead.
but we have such a hard time with death....
I wanna live...
well don't I?
you are f*cking something else.
slurp your green tea you bard.
Jai

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poem ... Black Blood in the Sandbox Atticus 12/11/04
Black Blood in the Sandbox..oh my f*cken lord..... Jai Narayan 12/11/04
Re: Black Blood in the Sandbox..oh my f*cken lord..... » Jai Narayan Atticus 12/11/04
Re: Black Blood in the Sandbox.. Jai Narayan 12/12/04
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