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Re: poem ... Pristine Mates of Sistine Paints

Posted by Toph on December 10, 2004, at 22:31:54

In reply to poem ... Pristine Mates of Sistine Paints, posted by Atticus on December 10, 2004, at 22:04:37

Interesting. I'm not sure who's the voyeur in this, you or me. One small grammatical correction:
> ... Wistful crystals, polar sobs, shiver-scented scarf’s wool
Catches...
You have subject/verb disagreement here (I think). LOL.
-Toph

 

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