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Displacement

Posted by smokeymadison on November 22, 2004, at 0:58:55

Displacemnt
measures the worth of a solitary life
among the atoms of existence
swells the potential
for the high shrill at the rim
around the wet mouth
the lips suck in air
gulping reason in defense against the onslaught
of self destruction
overflowing
the crystal liquid pours incessantly
priceless


i wrote this a few years ago, but i always go back to it when i feel like this...


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