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Posted by thinkfast on November 13, 2004, at 4:16:36

in the distance a flame flickers
desire
arms are heavy and fading
away
artificial depth that feels real
melody and the tones standing alone in beautiful flow
seperated, but still myself
worded in a way never before, to grow

over falls and into the landscape
want to be dissconnected, but I'm connected
want to be connected when I'm dissconnected
never when I choose to be effected

take these small phrases
run them through mazes and elaborate spaces
blur to the point as soft as the joint
blur, not anymore
I wish it were
overcome me, a headache pressure
the hammer measured
set, re-set and off again
wander round the corners
where is what I see?
I should do?
I should be?


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