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ode to the sultana

Posted by Jai Narayan on November 6, 2004, at 19:19:04

In reply to What about sultanas? (nm) » Jai Narayan, posted by alexandra_k on November 6, 2004, at 17:58:23

ode to the sultana

I have touched this precious
glowing glorious fine bit
but my teeth have not rapped around this
this that of this
well, I do think this fruit is such a delight
a feast for the eye
absolutely fabulous in size and shape
but my mandible has not known this in the biblical sense
of course I am busy reading The Prophecy of Osee Chapter I
The word of the Lord....etc
blah...blah.....
I hate to keep you from the absolutely succulent fruit.
Jai who is busy picking her teeth


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