Psycho-Babble Writing | for creative writing | Framed
This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | List of forums | Search | FAQ

Re: poem ... A Fractured Guitar Floats Origami Notes » Atticus

Posted by malthus on October 9, 2004, at 16:27:55

In reply to poem ... A Fractured Guitar Floats Origami Notes, posted by Atticus on October 8, 2004, at 16:28:00

Hi Atticus:

I love this piece. The opening line must be be from "The Persistence of Memory" by Salvador Dali, no? Also the rhyme scheme is wonderful, although I'm not sure what it is. Knowing you as I do you have invented one.

"MOMA’s sterile walls of
White
Are a dull frightful
Sight
To rich thick pigments,..."

After visiting MOMA this summer I particularly like this line. It's a bit ironic; I'm going to start the art chapter with my Spanish 3 students on Monday. Perhaps this poem would make for a good "anticipatory set" about art and artists such as yourself.

Estupendo.

malthus


Share
Tweet  

Thread

 

Post a new follow-up

Your message only Include above post


Notify the administrators

They will then review this post with the posting guidelines in mind.

To contact them about something other than this post, please use this form instead.

 

Start a new thread

 
Google
dr-bob.org www
Search options and examples
[amazon] for
in

This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | FAQ
Psycho-Babble Writing | Framed

poster:malthus thread:400493
URL: http://www.dr-bob.org/babble/write/20040925/msgs/400796.html