Posted by Atticus on October 6, 2004, at 11:44:04
In reply to Re: poem ... Got Eyes Like Leeches » Atticus, posted by saw on October 6, 2004, at 1:06:45
Thanks, Sabrina. I tried to keep it short, fast and punchy -- only four syllables per line -- to set up the quietly aggressive mood for the piece, a sense of moving fast even if you're standing still at a bar. I remember watching myself "drown" and thinking that somehow I had it coming all too well. Good luck! ;) Atticus
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