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Re: poem...Masquerade » malthus

Posted by Atticus on September 28, 2004, at 19:29:39

In reply to poem...Masquerade, posted by malthus on September 28, 2004, at 14:42:19

Well, I guess all I can comment is that characterizing someone's "soul" as "a winter night, black and frozen" doesn't exactly strike me as a dispassionate, objective description devoid of anger. But that's just my two cents. Atticus


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