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Re: My computer

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 23, 2004, at 14:59:03

In reply to My computer, posted by saw on September 23, 2004, at 7:16:52

I like this poem.
the tone is soothing and reassuring.

"Hello, I know that you've been feeling tired.
I bring you love and deeper understanding.
Hello, I know that you're unhappy.
I bring you love and deeper understanding."

the clincher is the deep sadness you feel.
especially since those around you are being cool.
What would be perfect is to have someone you appreciate holding you and repeating this till you melt into the deep relaxation that would probably follow.

I was at my therapists today and pondered what we all really want from our interactions: she said we all want this deep understanding and support.
So if we all want love and understanding why we are so far from getting or giving it?
She said we are all so complex....
Well sweet Sabrina, I give you understanding.
I encourage you to keep writing as well.
Good stuff.
Jai


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