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Re: poem ... Hello Kitty is God

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 22, 2004, at 22:07:57

In reply to poem ... Hello Kitty is God, posted by Atticus on September 22, 2004, at 9:50:42

Dear Atticus:
>
> “Hello Kitty is God”
> Purrs hot-pink hipster
> Subway-wall scripture,
> A spray-painted rosy and cozy hosanna

**rosy cozy hosanna....nice!

> Appear in crop circles in England
> As wheat genuflects in adoration.

** good line wheat genuflects....great!

> Of burning-bush benedictions
> As feverish pilgrims sprout polyvinyl stigmata

** love the mention of the stigmata

gosh religion was not wasted on you. Love your morph of this great religion.
as always
Jai, the banished


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