Posted by Angela2 on September 21, 2004, at 20:53:06
In reply to Imaginary, posted by saw on September 21, 2004, at 6:59:36
I like it. You seem in pain with passion, but with hope it will go away (you built your own world). I keep thinking about the "your reality" part and wonder if you could elaborate. Is it reality in general or is it literally someone else's point of view that you stray away from being a part of? You are a good writer, hope to hear more from you.
> I linger in the doorway
> of alarm clock screaming monsters calling my name
> Let me stay
> Where the wind will whisper to me
> Where the raindrops as they're falling tell a story.
>
> In my field of paper flowers
> And candy clouds of lullaby
> I lie inside myself for hours
> And watch my purple sky fly over me
>
> Don't say I'm out of touch
> With this rampant chaos - your reality
> I know well what lies beyond my sleeping refuge
> The nightmare I built my own world to escape
>
> Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
> Cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
> Oh how I long for the deep sleep dreaming
> The goddess of imaginery light
>
>
> Sabrina
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