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Re: ode to Timothy

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 18, 2004, at 9:55:26

In reply to Re: ode to Timothy, posted by Atticus on September 17, 2004, at 23:53:32

Atticus, as always your comments are appreciated. Your work is so brilliant and upbeat with darkness twisted in. I love the voice you bring to your work.

My work has gone through some changes.
Loss and abandonment are my life themes till I hit my 30's.
I would be curious what you think of a departure voice I used.

But my mind is revisiting old moods, thoughts, and feelings.
I am wearing an old mood like a favorite blue dress.
It feels familiar.
In my 30's I doned a body suit of red with orange flames.
I burned so much of my life when I was red.
Lately it seems I am wearing a coat that is transparent.
I can now see through my skin.


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