Posted by Atticus on September 17, 2004, at 23:41:49
In reply to mummy why do you burn so? your face scares me., posted by Jai Narayan on September 17, 2004, at 20:46:26
I really like the level of physical detail and description that you bring to stories like this. Telling bits of description like the dew on your dress add to the intensity of the scene by heightening its vividness. Your stories about your troubled relationship with your mother always seem to have this quality of hyper-realism to them, and the straightforward nature of the narrative tone makes the irrationality of her behavior all the more striking. A touching and unsettling story that is very effective. Atticus
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