Posted by Jai Narayan on August 28, 2004, at 7:20:27
In reply to Re: poem...Lazarus » malthus, posted by malthus on August 27, 2004, at 22:48:54
I hope it's okay for me to comment?
Your poem was lovely and very well written. The more I read it, the more I like it, and I get a deeper meaning out of the words.
It has a serene beauty.
Your story about how the poem came to be gives the poem even more depth.
I loved hearing your story and found it was not too long at all. The stories of our lives are so rich. I am touched by yours.
I look forward to more of your writing.Jai Narayan the crone who cares
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