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Re: fiction ... Hungry Pavement, Part 1

Posted by malthus on August 26, 2004, at 22:07:59

In reply to fiction ... Hungry Pavement, Part 1, posted by Atticus on August 26, 2004, at 13:04:41

Hi Atticus-

As usual I'm right there with you, seeing through your eyes. I'll never look at a Philadelphia Septa bus and not think of you:

"...that this line of metallic pachyderms..."

And I again laughed out loud with this line:

"His cap blew off and his comb-over began to wave wildly back and forth, adding a bizarre comical touch to the scene"

malthus waiting with baited marlboro lights breath


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