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Re: poem...Oblivion

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 22, 2004, at 8:49:21

In reply to poem...Oblivion, posted by malthus on August 22, 2004, at 5:58:44

Like the cookie said while he was being interrogated by Lord Farquar in Shrek
"Don't do it!"
The poem carries me on a lovely light filled with love and it's delight then you take me to this dark place where only death will suffice.
I say.... NO!
I don't want love through death....
not yours certainly.
I take everything so literally.
Am I going in the wrong direction with this?
Are you considering something?



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