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Re: poem ... Naked Fat Guy on the RR Line, 1987

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 20, 2004, at 16:18:08

In reply to poem ... Naked Fat Guy on the RR Line, 1987, posted by Atticus on August 20, 2004, at 11:16:43

I think this poem could be a movie short.
It's got all the drama and flesh of hollywood. Somebody gets naked, somebody gets irate, a tension builds, people get tense, the tension builds to it's climax and then the escape....
everyone cheers and there's a moment where all are one....
This has it all.
I was a film maker.
I love it, I love it, I love it....
Shall we do lunch?


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