Posted by Jai Narayan on August 13, 2004, at 15:24:57
In reply to poem... Green Through-the-Looking-Glass Eyes, 2000, posted by Atticus on August 13, 2004, at 9:50:25
wonderful wonderful w-o-n-d-e-r-f-u-l
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I love what you do with those words! You make them sparkle and dance.
Love everything about this one.Sometimes you have a few sentences that stand out and out shine the rest of the poem but this one's even and smooth. Almost like not reading at all....it just floats through my brain.
My gosh you have been through so much with your meds. I have been fortunate and never needed meds.
My mothers drug was Stelazine(really not sure of the spelling). Her hands would move all the time and her thumbs would make little circles on the steering wheel when she drove the car. Her hands were always tense with what looked like fury.
My sister said for the first 7 months of Lithium her hands trembled so terribly she almost quit. She did stay on Lithium and has been stable for decades.Hands....they are the "tell".
Jai Narayan the humble penitent who sits for long hours praying and meditating
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