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Re: poem ... Spots

Posted by Jai Narayan on July 23, 2004, at 15:36:46

In reply to poem ... Spots, posted by Atticus on July 22, 2004, at 20:09:30

I read this to my partner as I gulped for air and brushed off my tears of (yes) recognition.

I come from too many generations of cutters....some very sucessful.

It was heart stopping.

You are right it's startlingly vivid.
And...I use the same vocabulary that you do to describe....
it's uncanny.
thank you for transporting me into your experience....I thank the goddess you lived.


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