Posted by tabitha on July 1, 2004, at 0:32:40
In reply to My Life in this World of Miserable Bores. (link), posted by KID A on June 28, 2004, at 18:40:33
I like ranty poems like that. And nonsense poems. I liked this anagram poem a lot..
http://forums.poetryx.com/viewtopic.php?t=376
So that line in yours about the bread-fed crowd in the stadium, is that a reference to that William Carlos Williams one, about the crowd at the ballgame?
I have the same reaction to a lot of your poems.. the words and rhythyms are pretty, and smart, but I hear a lot of self-hatred in them, so it's an attraction/repulsion reaction. Kinda like looking at art made of raw meat.
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