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poem.....before

Posted by thinkfast on June 17, 2004, at 6:15:19

before
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the mood slips
a thought from everywhere in here
surrounding
going south
familiar
but everything is different
intensity runs but scared to flee
and all it takes is one
one thought to bring
one thought to bleed
calm and mellow
to suffering the strain
all i am is here, nothing more
sounds drip from the canal
a free-fall to what's left of me
before the mood slips
a thought from everyhwere in here
surrounding
going south
familiar
everything is different
with these same eyes
hyper-drive blurs passing scenery
levitation
dip my feet into the ocean
pray to stay
cold distance beccons my return
before
i am away


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